From 931bb26bb2b22f4aa2ee3263e16f74039c18b13a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Kupfer <mkupfer@alum.berkeley.edu>
Date: Thu, 30 Jun 2022 11:21:12 +0200
Subject: Clarify `version-control' in the Emacs manual

* doc/emacs/files.texi (Backup Names): Rephrase for greater
clarity (bug#56291).
---
 doc/emacs/files.texi | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/emacs/files.texi')

diff --git a/doc/emacs/files.texi b/doc/emacs/files.texi
index fa02d264f97..7b4e31e5f84 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/files.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/files.texi
@@ -655,10 +655,10 @@ Never make numbered backups; always make single backups.
 The usual way to set this variable is globally, through your init file
 or the customization buffer.  However, you can set
 @code{version-control} locally in an individual buffer to control the
-making of backups for that buffer's file (@pxref{Locals}).  You can
-have Emacs set @code{version-control} locally whenever you visit a
-given file (@pxref{File Variables}).  Some modes, such as Rmail mode,
-set this variable.
+making of backups for that buffer's file (@pxref{Locals}).  Some
+modes, such as Rmail mode, set this variable.  You can also have Emacs
+set @code{version-control} locally whenever you visit a given file
+(@pxref{File Variables}).
 
 @cindex @env{VERSION_CONTROL} environment variable
   If you set the environment variable @env{VERSION_CONTROL}, to tell
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